"to protect and to serve"

How would I go about appealing my application? My application was disqualified for grammatical issues. I attempted to amend the application on my IRL birthday, and possibly didn't look as hard as I could at any errors.

Name: Edmund Exley

I just realized that I'll be on Spring Break vacation from the 24th-27th. If I were to be accepted, is a private session totally out of the picture once I return to LA?